spoiled milk

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joel
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spoiled milk

Post by joel » March 4th, 2011, 10:14 am

In the back of the fridge is a carton of milk
forgotten and rotten and wrong
that's put up a stink to be noticed, I think,
in hope its release won't wait long.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

Steve Plonk
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Re: spoiled milk

Post by Steve Plonk » March 4th, 2011, 1:36 pm

Joel, Great droll humor & irony. These things happen...

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dadio
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Re: spoiled milk

Post by dadio » March 5th, 2011, 4:52 am

Good poem. 8)

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Re: spoiled milk

Post by saw » March 5th, 2011, 8:31 am

everything living thing we know gives us signals that something is amiss....
if we don't pay attention to mother earth, she will sour......of course, this is just a poem about forgotten milk....or is it ?
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