ANOTHER FINE BEGINNING.

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ANOTHER FINE BEGINNING.

Post by dadio » March 8th, 2011, 4:54 am

And Max’s wife said, I’d rather
Screw Mr Spodish along the hall
Than you, and Max said, what’s

So special about Mr Spodish?
And his wife said, at least he
Smiles at me passing on the

Stairs and says good morning
To me and has manners and
Doesn’t pass wind in front of

Me and always opens the door
For me and Max said, sure and
Only because he’d like to get into

Your panties and have his way
With you and his wife said, you’re
Jealous of him because you’re

Just a bum, a good for nothing,
Drinking, smoking, womanizing
Bum and Max had a slurp of his

Coffee and a bite of his toast and
Stared at her across the breakfast
Table, taking in her eyes and hair

And lips and the way her ears poked
Through the hair at the sides and
The small dimples on her cheeks

And said, while you’re out at the
Shops don’t forget to buy me my
Motor magazine and cigarettes

And buy yourself a new dress and
Book a table for two at the posh
Restaurant for Friday night and she

Looked back at him and said, ok
And next time you see Mr Spodish,
Tell him to quit eyeing me over and

Lusting after me and Max said,
Consider it done, Honey, consider
It done, and blew his wife a kiss

Across the table over the coffee pot
And toast rack and cereal box and
Small pot of flowers and ashtray,

Another fine beginning, Max thought
Biting into the toast, to another fine day.
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Re: ANOTHER FINE BEGINNING.

Post by joel » March 8th, 2011, 8:18 am

something really sweet tucked into this one, dadio....
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Re: ANOTHER FINE BEGINNING.

Post by dadio » March 8th, 2011, 8:40 am

thank you, joel.

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Re: ANOTHER FINE BEGINNING.

Post by judih » March 8th, 2011, 10:24 am

playful duel of drama with optimism at the breakfast table

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Re: ANOTHER FINE BEGINNING.

Post by Arcadia » March 8th, 2011, 12:38 pm

am duet full of engines starting, toasts & lists!! Enjoyed reading it, gracias dadio!!! :D

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Re: ANOTHER FINE BEGINNING.

Post by dadio » March 8th, 2011, 2:42 pm

Thank you, Judih & Arcadia.

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Re: ANOTHER FINE BEGINNING.

Post by saw » March 9th, 2011, 7:38 am

little reminders through the week go a long way in making a partner feel special....but if you are called on the carpet, you best be able to think on your feet...ha ha.......nice dialogue..........
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Re: ANOTHER FINE BEGINNING.

Post by dadio » March 9th, 2011, 8:08 am

thank you, 8) saw.

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