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sonofthesun
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inundation

Post by sonofthesun » March 28th, 2011, 3:56 am

loss in its mass
sometimes more is less
allow more to make more of your less
other visions to illuminate
the sillyness called civilization
let the masses express
There is no empty space
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Re: inundation

Post by joel » March 28th, 2011, 4:28 pm

...I don't follow all the meaning, but it has an organic beauty, organized like what I've known from an old PennaDutch powwow charm...but which I'm sure is older...and I don't know what it means either, but it's what this poem brings to mind (in very good ways):

SATOR
AREPO
TENET
OPERA
ROTAS
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw
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Re: inundation

Post by ButterflyKiss » March 29th, 2011, 2:52 pm

Again, wow. I feel this...
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