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saw
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onset

Post by saw » June 28th, 2011, 11:59 am

granola eaten
oats stained
with blueberry juice
colliding with almond milk
crossword puzzles
inked
new york times
the baltimore sun
brothers of the morning
coffee
blackening
the parts it's supposed to
I guess,
air
cool
sky
crisp
porch plants seem happy
what could go wrong ?
I would begin the beguine
if I knew
what a fucking beguine was
but for now
I'll activate
this rocking chair
like there's no
tomorrow
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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dadio
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Re: onset

Post by dadio » June 29th, 2011, 3:36 am

Bukowski & I love this poem. 8)

saw
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Re: onset

Post by saw » June 30th, 2011, 8:40 am

thanx dadio.....appreciate the feedback.......
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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