ching young village

[creativesoul]

people come around like dave, who was a professional butler all his life and now lives in a van wherever he parks it..i was eating my rice and veggies when i see dave looking older than usual- yet i sure that what i claim and what is really mine are not the same tonight...and i was suddenly reminded of spot our dalmation who hated ms chings cats- so she paid my husband to build a big cat house for all the cats...but spot never gave up-dave lives back behind my shop= my friends all have broken bodies but not broken souls-what once seemed soiled was now beauty=what left with you was me- the piece i want and have taken back- get a life- stop trying to steal my soul

[dadio]

fine prose poem. reminds me of Pound's translations...

[saw]

there is a hint of desperate times, but that is met with defiance....I like the confrontation c-soul

[creativesoul]

there is a stalker on here- i used to love- and they think they are really slick writing or whatever they do-so it is subtle but the mother fucker isnt posting in here anymore now is he?
sorry sisters and brothers- i was onto it anyway- check it out from that angle... yeah it is a piece- lol

[mnaz]

love anything to do with declarations of independence. sing the freedom songs ...

[creativesoul]

thanx aloha..