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creativesoul
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skin like gray

Post by creativesoul » August 22nd, 2011, 11:04 pm

the life force
had not yet returned
the skin on her face was ashen
her lips dark
some white powder
and she was chowder
way louder funnnier
dusty like in flavor
like the road on the bottom of your feet
see the medallions
those marks like one of birth
that have darker souls trembling in fear
because they see
the mark
the stain
the blood
the lifeline
they demmanded everything and supplied everything=Creator she had to cry today on the beach
that water
they call us the water people=blu
i listen to the water
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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dadio
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Re: skin like gray

Post by dadio » August 23rd, 2011, 3:08 am

Powerful poem. 8)

Kailashana
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Re: skin like gray

Post by Kailashana » August 23rd, 2011, 8:56 am

I listen to the water.

And the silence between each drop.


~A

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Re: skin like gray

Post by creativesoul » August 24th, 2011, 12:57 am

aloha
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: skin like gray

Post by saw » August 24th, 2011, 3:00 am

on a good day the water reflects who we are back to us, ripples and all.....peace
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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