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david
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crackhead

Post by david » November 19th, 2012, 12:57 pm

I'll blow you for 25 quid she said
or 30 for a bare shaft
then knelt down among the dogends and rusty cans,
her hand with blackened pipe burns
cupped his ass.
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Re: crackhead

Post by revolutionrabbit » November 19th, 2012, 4:55 pm

her crack cracked cracking ass
pass the numb numbing glass
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Re: crackhead

Post by dadio » November 21st, 2012, 7:40 am

Has that Bill Burroughs touch. V Good. 8)
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Re: crackhead

Post by Atehequa » November 21st, 2012, 9:24 am

Good poem.

They always remind me of soulless zombies existing for naught but another hit off the crack pipe.
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Re: crackhead

Post by david » November 22nd, 2012, 1:04 pm

Revolution
Dadio
Atehequa

Thanks for your reads and posts....

happy that "SOULLESS " quality came through it was my aim.....D
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Re: crackhead

Post by sweetwater » November 22nd, 2012, 4:13 pm

henri miller might have thought of it first
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Re: crackhead

Post by david » November 23rd, 2012, 6:54 pm

thanks Sweetwater I shall check him out...D
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