10:05 a.m.

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the mingo
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10:05 a.m.

Post by the mingo » March 3rd, 2013, 11:11 am

10:05 a.m.

we each take our positions
stripped of all nonsense
you to doze & wait developments
me to begin drinking coffee

if i were
talking to myself
i'd say don't even
think about it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: 10:05 a.m.

Post by dadio » March 6th, 2013, 4:03 pm

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Re: 10:05 a.m.

Post by saw » March 12th, 2013, 7:46 am

sweet ...
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: 10:05 a.m.

Post by theirishsea » March 15th, 2013, 10:20 am

Second stanza is superb understatement.
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.
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