shadows in the sun

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sweetwater
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shadows in the sun

Post by sweetwater » June 8th, 2013, 10:11 am

we think we are alone in a subjectivity and relativity
of our aloneness
we think our thoughts are unique in the blending
of experience and education

our aloneness itself is a paranoia and isolation
in the cloistered afternoon
and when we awake to the living scent and wonder

of a forest sometimes we realize
we are not relative to our sight
the things we see and witness
nor the
sound of where we are

we are a part of it

waking into the realization
there is no subjectivity

or the question - is it subjective

as if to say

if the subjectivity in itself is subjective
then the forest is an invention or fabrication
or the sea is an illusion

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justwalt
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Re: shadows in the sun

Post by justwalt » June 8th, 2013, 10:08 pm

we are a part of it...
(???) :wink:

we are it
many is a word

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dadio
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Re: shadows in the sun

Post by dadio » June 15th, 2013, 5:11 am

You have go my brain working with this fine poem. 8)

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