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creativesoul
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Post by creativesoul » January 6th, 2014, 9:08 pm

way over there
where you are
i felt you inside me

like no time had passed at all'
you were here
smiling
i want to believe
the love is in there
with you

i guess our spirits are still intertwined
even when it is not so much fun

i can feel you thinking
-
that metal dust has made a crust
in a place i trust


once we spoke
of a dream
i had
it is getting closer
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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dadio
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Post by dadio » January 7th, 2014, 2:53 am

So well done. 8)

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Post by creativesoul » January 7th, 2014, 11:21 am

Thank you- dad io - it seems that this is actully a bit sad -and that- perhaps there is more to it all then I previously had imagined-
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Re: heard

Post by sonofthesun » January 16th, 2014, 3:09 am

A beautiful flower. Looks as if the bees have already done their job. The pollen has been introduced.
There is no empty space

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Post by creativesoul » January 16th, 2014, 4:54 am

Weeee- pollen mmmm honey
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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