Receding Waters

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Tjflowers80
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Receding Waters

Post by Tjflowers80 » November 1st, 2014, 10:23 pm

The night the waters receded
My heart found solace within;
Turning away from one so conceded
To allow the spirit to re begin.

There's no way of knowing
What kind of prick you are;
The personality that your showing
Makes you venture from your status of star.

I once thought you truly cared
Giving me the needed strength
But now I know why you shared
And why I didn't go the extra length.

Goodbye my redheaded man.
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor

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Re: Receding Waters

Post by saw » November 2nd, 2014, 4:22 pm

the ebb and flow of life
no one can hold back the cycles
of interaction when the situation demands a shift.....
still the river rolls

well done
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Receding Waters

Post by WIREMAN » November 2nd, 2014, 6:13 pm

concede the conceit and u will find the control no more.....life a lesson continually learned or did i mean don't get burned???.....lovely read 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: Receding Waters

Post by Tjflowers80 » November 2nd, 2014, 10:41 pm

Wes, saw and wireman thank you all for your replies. It is deceit and fake people who inspired this one. I think my heart went mentally out for trusting them. Wes definitely sick of kissing frogs, time for my prince to show. Saw the cycle for me seems to lead to my own constant hell due to stupidity particularly mine. Lol. Wireman I've learned to let go of control these past months, control seems to be the thing burning my butt nonstop. But I think these past months have been the waters that drown out the hurt and bring the comfort needed to survive the the scars. Thank you all.

Jess
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor

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