the uranus attic

[mtmynd]

Uranus seems to be very popular. No shit! Look at all the views! How does it feel to have so many people looking at Uranus?

Uranus, being the 7th planet from the Sun, is burdened by having twenty-seven (27!) known moons looking over it's shoulder. Is it any wonder that it needs an attic to find some solace?

Receiving over 130 views in 3 days is a real surprise for a poem I was reluctant to post at first. But knowing what a cool group S8'ers are, I went ahead with no expectations. The response has been about as "far out" as Uranus, 1.787 Billion miles from Phar Lepht.

Gracie, Dor'... thx for the comment! (I'm smiling)...

[Doreen Peri]

237 views as of now! Far out!

[WIREMAN]

uranus a true literary planet....its moons named for shakespeare and pope characters

[mtmynd]

uranus a true literary planet....its moons named for shakespeare and pope characters

It really is! all those moons and someone heavy into Shakespeare. I wonder how many were named by the same person. How long did Uranus spin around and around and around the Sun so far away remaining nameless and silent even with so much company to keep 'U' going.

C~

[whoaisme]

i enjoyed your use of color and color words.

even when you say "blood" i think red and "coke" i think white

lost me a couple times but i dig this.

keep writing hard!

[creativesoul]

I think perhaps quite often I am contemplating ur anus far more then I care to mention
When I really should be thinking about my own
But sometimes the interaction can be sweet- however- I cannot really express how horrible it is when you have a ur- anus problem-
Yep

[mtmynd]

i enjoyed your use of color and color words.

even when you say "blood" i think red and "coke" i think white

lost me a couple times but i dig this.

keep writing hard!

Thank you much, Whoa... I appreciate it.

[WIREMAN]

back to the top...Uranus rules!

[creativesoul]

The attic was full of family items
Over the years time had told
Us stories of cold Uranus
The holy grail of the heinous
Laughing across wild skies
Stars just batted their eyes
Eyelashes of angels
Tickled his eyes
As she held on tight
With her thighs
The beauty of naked in sight
Uranus stalked the universe
For the strange and perverse
The sandy beaches on mars
Did nothing but leave scars
Oh life on Uranus is bazzar

[WIREMAN]

uranus blue
hangin out there
surrounded by
shakespearian moons
what else could
uranus do but
foster so many moons

[mtmynd]

uranus blue
hangin out there
surrounded by
shakespearian moons
what else could
uranus do but
foster so many moons

seeking solace wthin one's own attic
where the chilled breath gasps
for more and more... as the thump
of the attic's closed door remains
a memory of when the Sun bathed thee
and brought joy to it's many, many moons

thanks CS ... gracias, wired one... Uranus thanks you.

[creativesoul]

each little memory
opened the door to where she had left
ideas=speculations
perceptions
the attic was extremely content
to hold these things in her breasts
the moons held still

[mtmynd]

each little memory
opened the door to where she had left
ideas=speculations
perceptions
the attic was extremely content
to hold these things in her breasts
the moons held still

the well-oiled door sealed tightly
to keep out dreaded ice-o'-lation
all those ideas and speculations
were perceived thru a blue cloud
where the birth of the blues came
to life holding tight next to her
breasts along with Shakespeare's moons

[WIREMAN]

27 moons
and rings
upon rings
clouded in
blue, blurred
best observed
at the bar
who was this guy
Pope, another brit
i suppose, he musta
been unearthly
character, which we
know old shakin' willie
was, kinda become an
anus jam, i likes it!

[mtmynd]

Uranus, my anus, we all gots an anus...