It's All About Perspective

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68degrees
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It's All About Perspective

Post by 68degrees » October 13th, 2015, 11:00 pm

The man faces a wall, it is painted
the color of autumn apple tree leaves,
it hints of its own orchard

When he stares at the wall, it is enough
to make the woman look
at him and smile
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saw
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Re: It's All About Perspective

Post by saw » October 14th, 2015, 9:30 am

simple beauty.... :wink:
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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Tjflowers80
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Re: It's All About Perspective

Post by Tjflowers80 » October 24th, 2015, 12:35 am

Side to side and from front to back
360 degrees around me
The loneliness leaves my heart black
Even though autumn unfolds around me.

Very nice!
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

Jessica Taylor
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the mingo
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Re: It's All About Perspective

Post by the mingo » October 24th, 2015, 11:42 am

* 8) *
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: It's All About Perspective

Post by 68degrees » November 2nd, 2015, 10:22 pm

Thanks for the responses here. Appreciate it very much.

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