sorry, I wasn't paying attention
sorry, I wasn't paying attention
my ego is withering
like an ancient red oak
my bark is faint, I leave
rather than waste time
fighting with another
decrepit highwayman
with exaggerated tales
of heroism and conquest
Sorry , my brother
What did you say ?
I wasn't paying attention
my thoughts were aboard
a magic carpet flying low
across the glassy lake
I'm sorry Madam
i was busy smiling at geese
What was that you said ?
You're angry about my clothing ?
why i would wear a clown suit to church
Honk Honk, says my big red nose
What did you say ? huh...my lapel
flower squirted you in the eye ?
Dear Me
I wasn't really paying attention
like an ancient red oak
my bark is faint, I leave
rather than waste time
fighting with another
decrepit highwayman
with exaggerated tales
of heroism and conquest
Sorry , my brother
What did you say ?
I wasn't paying attention
my thoughts were aboard
a magic carpet flying low
across the glassy lake
I'm sorry Madam
i was busy smiling at geese
What was that you said ?
You're angry about my clothing ?
why i would wear a clown suit to church
Honk Honk, says my big red nose
What did you say ? huh...my lapel
flower squirted you in the eye ?
Dear Me
I wasn't really paying attention
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
Re: sorry, I wasn't paying attention
...awesome write or should I say your right....
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me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Re: sorry, I wasn't paying attention
Poetry is like the little tramp, nice poem,
Re: sorry, I wasn't paying attention
thanx gents....



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Re: sorry, I wasn't paying attention
excuse me what was that, i wasn't ............
enjoyed the write
enjoyed the write
When we speak we are afraid our words will not be heard or welcomed. But when we are silent, we are still afraid. So it is better to speak. ~ Audre Lorde
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Re: sorry, I wasn't paying attention
wish i'd said all that
or maybe i did and didn't notice?
or maybe i did and didn't notice?
Re: sorry, I wasn't paying attention
Good work. 

Re: sorry, I wasn't paying attention
thanx y'all ...appreciate the feedback
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Re: sorry, I wasn't paying attention
Yes, some one asked me about the election, I said "what election?" the magic carpet flying low across the lake is wonderful , I will find my self among the spanish moss in our big oaks. very much appreciated how the poem caught the way I feel these days when I am at peace must remember to go there .
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Re: sorry, I wasn't paying attention
i like real rhthyum and blues
poetry - snapping my fingers
my ears whispering ' yeah yeah'
that,,,,,,,,,, caught my attention................................................................................................................. that funny feeling in the pit of your stomach
and i was not really paying attention
do you get it?
i could have missed the whole thing,,,,,,,,
poetry - snapping my fingers
my ears whispering ' yeah yeah'
that,,,,,,,,,, caught my attention................................................................................................................. that funny feeling in the pit of your stomach
and i was not really paying attention
do you get it?
i could have missed the whole thing,,,,,,,,
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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