Loving the Hit

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Loving the Hit

Post by the mingo » October 18th, 2017, 7:58 am

judih once praised
my sardonic bent
I had to look up the word
she had headed the hit on the nail
I loved it 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Loving the Hit

Post by saw » October 18th, 2017, 9:30 am

sardonic wit
bends nails...
said nails are bent
never to be straightened again
like mingo
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism

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Re: Loving the Hit

Post by judih » October 18th, 2017, 10:57 pm

sardonism

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Re: Loving the Hit

Post by the mingo » October 19th, 2017, 5:31 am

I love bent - I seem to have taken up napping lately - as opposed to a straight-thru-the- night zonkout fest - I love bent - I love naps - I love sardonism
& living room on-the-floor camp-outs - coyotes hunting in the TV - owls hunting rats in the kitchen - I love natural blondes sitting in red vinyl bucket seats
of a 1967 Plymouth Satellite - Halleluyah !
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Loving the Hit

Post by mnaz » November 18th, 2017, 4:55 pm

Got some affinity for old sardonism myself.
I just want that old droptop, a 64 Futura or
maybe a 68 Fairlane, with the 289 V8 of
course and red bench, fuck the buckets,
those wannabe sportsters, and yes
a good woman of course.

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Re: Loving the Hit

Post by sasha » November 18th, 2017, 5:30 pm

sardonism
the national dish of sardonia
have a taste for it myself
"what I shoulda said was..."
gift from my dad
the zen master of the form
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"If one could deduce the nature of the Creator from a study of creation, it would appear that He has an inordinate fondness for beetles." -- evolutionary biologist J B S Haldane, (1892-1964)

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Re: Loving the Hit

Post by the mingo » November 20th, 2017, 5:30 am

fuck the buckets,
those wannabe sportsters,
yeah yeah you just another bench seat pussy, mark, in a farked-out faggot Ford - 8) real men drive Mopar don't ya know - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Loving the Hit

Post by mnaz » November 20th, 2017, 5:34 am

Mo pahr to ya.

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Re: Loving the Hit

Post by the mingo » November 20th, 2017, 5:36 am

"what I shoulda said was..."
... that gun has haunted us all 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Loving the Hit

Post by the mingo » November 20th, 2017, 5:37 am

mnaz wrote:
November 20th, 2017, 5:34 am
Mo pahr to ya.
hell yeah, Mongolia - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: Loving the Hit

Post by WIREMAN » November 20th, 2017, 12:01 pm

All night ramblers 😎
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: Loving the Hit

Post by the mingo » November 20th, 2017, 2:47 pm

<* 8) *>
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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