Adrenaline

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creativesoul
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Adrenaline

Post by creativesoul » June 2nd, 2019, 1:15 am

I guess a girl like me
Couldn’t drink without having a problem
Did coffee of various types in northwest Oregon

I was told I was operating on “ false fire “ energy which is basicly “ sugar “..
I had to learn to eat broccoli and salmon
Made tofu my friend
It’s taken forever to get here

I believe adrenaline has saved my ass on numerous occasions
In the grandma club now
Ya got to act fast sometimes
Getting fragile in my old age
Happy to be meeting 4 and 8 year olds - and a good happy family
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

theirishsea
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Re: Adrenaline

Post by theirishsea » June 2nd, 2019, 2:13 pm

I like the ending----got to act fast meeting 4 & 8 yr olds----and what made me smile---"a good happy family."
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

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Re: Adrenaline

Post by creativesoul » June 18th, 2019, 9:43 pm

Thank you for your input- I like it
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Adrenaline

Post by saw » June 19th, 2019, 11:42 am

I like the brevity
just enough to say a lot
it's compact with poetic muscle
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism

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