Humbled

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creativesoul
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Humbled

Post by creativesoul » March 4th, 2023, 9:49 am

Once or twice
I thought I was all that

Until recently
When I met the real deal

Medicine people
They light me up

And now I’m electrocuted
The night is full of physical dreams

I wake up
Smoke


Because I have not watched t v in months
Now I got my own station

And no remote
Always looking for that thing

Somehow I get guidance
Even when I do not ask

Years I chased this
Now that it’s in my lap

I want to sleep
With my love
And rest
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

saw
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Re: Humbled

Post by saw » March 4th, 2023, 10:06 am

" Because I have not watched tv in months
Now I got my own station "

Love it

the whole poem grabs you
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism

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