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Lucy!
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Romance

Post by Lucy! » January 21st, 2006, 10:01 pm

Romance is a concept
best served in the surreal


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Post by mnaz » January 22nd, 2006, 3:20 am

The surreal smacks around real,
when real gets too full of itself.

Or something like that.
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Post by ~K » February 19th, 2006, 3:39 am

beware
romantic
hallucinations
kiss
& tell
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Post by stilltrucking » February 19th, 2006, 6:38 pm

The surreal smacks around real,
when real gets too full of itself.
I don't know mnaz she just kills me with her focus.
she strips it down to the bone, it don't take much time, don't waste a word.
And I am thinking about her undeath poem. Is that what you call a koan?
PreDeath drips into UnDeath
Undeath plummets into Death
AfterDeath ravishes all

Nothingness emerges

Predeath succeeds again
LT 11/25/05 reposted without permission.

good work baby sister :D
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Post by Ann Bingham » February 19th, 2006, 6:56 pm

short sweet and to the point.

nice work

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Post by stilltrucking » February 19th, 2006, 11:22 pm

:?


sorry ann not sure if I was the who confused you.
this is the poem I was talking about.

http://www.studioeight.tv/phpbb/viewtop ... ght=#35160
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