Der Prozess

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Susan Marie
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Der Prozess

Post by Susan Marie » April 12th, 2007, 1:08 pm

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i feel like Jesus

days before his 

breakdown

           slipslide

paydirt

         bedrock 
 

nailbed distillation
 

olive trees birthed
relics of tulips, burlesque
lilting heads
while the twelve slept
a jury mast

no thought
            speech
                     sound                                             

interminable 

a vociferous silence
of one heart beating
met with distorted
                    choleric
                              indifference 

it is this quest i detest
on muddied knees
yet beg of you, Gethsamane
absolute reincarnation to appease

immaculate
anxiety                               

i stumble with you
palms to Earth
head first 

towards evanescence

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Post by Doreen Peri » April 12th, 2007, 1:29 pm

I love it! I want to hear it! I just read it aloud and as with most all of your work, it's music! Fine work!

WELCOME!

Ms. Poet... I am most honored you have graced us with your presence!

Hope you enjoy it here as much as we'll enjoy having you!

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Susan Marie
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Post by Susan Marie » April 12th, 2007, 5:10 pm

Thanks Dor!

I feel like I can breathe in here!

You wanna hear it - trust me, you know me, I will have spoken word in here.

There is so much in here, I have to go through everything!

A great room . . . excellent topics. I love it.

I am honored to be here, finally.

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Re: Der Prozess

Post by joel » April 12th, 2007, 7:10 pm

Susan Marie wrote: i feel like Jesus

days before his

breakdown

slipslide

paydirt

bedrock


nailbed distillation


olive trees birthed
relics of tulips, burlesque
lilting heads
while the twelve slept
a jury mast

no thought
speech
sound

interminable

a vociferous silence
of one heart beating
met with distorted
choleric
indifference

it is this quest i detest
on muddied knees
yet beg of you, Gethsamane
absolute reincarnation to appease

immaculate
anxiety

i stumble with you
palms to Earth
head first

towards evanescence
i wanted to quote the parts i wanted to read again. awesome.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Susan Marie
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Post by Susan Marie » April 12th, 2007, 8:11 pm

Thank you Joel, I have so much reading to do , I just got here

Gosh you are making me blush quoting the entire thing!

*smile*

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