#23 -The "I Can't Wait Word Jam" March 8-16, 08
- stilltrucking
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- stilltrucking
- Posts: 20645
- Joined: October 24th, 2004, 12:29 pm
- Location: Oz or somepLace like Kansas
put the wait
right on me
waiting for a freind
waiting for the sky to turn blue
waiting for a ryhme
to turn true
waiting for daylight
to save the time
in search of a lost hour
as I spring forward
tick tock
set the clocks
oz never gave the tinman
nothing that he didn't already have
tin man wears a timex
he takes a beating
hollow as a drum
stuff him straw
just in time for the spring thaw
rust in peace
my heart keeps perfect time
but my ears can't find a ryhme
beating
beaten
beat
rusty
metal
man
right on me
waiting for a freind
waiting for the sky to turn blue
waiting for a ryhme
to turn true
waiting for daylight
to save the time
in search of a lost hour
as I spring forward
tick tock
set the clocks
oz never gave the tinman
nothing that he didn't already have
tin man wears a timex
he takes a beating
hollow as a drum
stuff him straw
just in time for the spring thaw
rust in peace
my heart keeps perfect time
but my ears can't find a ryhme
beating
beaten
beat
rusty
metal
man
- Dave The Dov
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- Location: Madison Wisconsin which is right here
- Contact:
would Bukowski stand a black tea-cocek-ciranda morning toast?
(good morning, dave!)
mm, have I ever read Ferlinghetti?
really don´t know
hard to have a net-memory
books are easy to remember
yesterday´s movie still in my head
not too much sounds
except the Texas´s wind & thunder
voices & cars
shots & an envelope shrinking and des-shrinking
really want to continue sleeping
but I promised to go
to the green fields
today
for a while
see you later!

(good morning, dave!)
mm, have I ever read Ferlinghetti?
really don´t know
hard to have a net-memory
books are easy to remember
yesterday´s movie still in my head
not too much sounds
except the Texas´s wind & thunder
voices & cars
shots & an envelope shrinking and des-shrinking
really want to continue sleeping
but I promised to go
to the green fields
today
for a while
see you later!
- Doreen Peri
- Site Admin
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- Location: Virginia
- Contact:
I waited for morning
in a dream haze, praised
the coming of dawn with
a sigh in the middle of my
nightmare, no resolution of
puzzles solved, only heartbeats
keeping rhythm to answer delays,
then today,
I awaken having lost an hour,
the power of a morn already gone,
afternoon soon comes,
numbness to the circular clock
sets in. You cannot with this fight
with time. Gone is its fate.
So much for the wait.
....
g'morning jamsters!
in a dream haze, praised
the coming of dawn with
a sigh in the middle of my
nightmare, no resolution of
puzzles solved, only heartbeats
keeping rhythm to answer delays,
then today,
I awaken having lost an hour,
the power of a morn already gone,
afternoon soon comes,
numbness to the circular clock
sets in. You cannot with this fight
with time. Gone is its fate.
So much for the wait.
....
g'morning jamsters!

- judih
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- Location: kibbutz nir oz, israel
- Contact:
yes, i scream
i've survived a day!
who woulda thought it could be
but it was!
and i'm amazed.
oh, sweet survival.
nothing beats walking up to a door
pausing, breathing, steadying one's heart
opening door,
entering, functioning
and then, successfully leaving door
and on the way out, cleaning up excess mess
putting a smile on a frowner's face
offering some hope
that tomorrow's door
will be a bit easier to open
(this is not a poem, but in jam, a poem is not always a poem)
i've survived a day!
who woulda thought it could be
but it was!
and i'm amazed.
oh, sweet survival.
nothing beats walking up to a door
pausing, breathing, steadying one's heart
opening door,
entering, functioning
and then, successfully leaving door
and on the way out, cleaning up excess mess
putting a smile on a frowner's face
offering some hope
that tomorrow's door
will be a bit easier to open
(this is not a poem, but in jam, a poem is not always a poem)
- Doreen Peri
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- Joined: July 10th, 2004, 3:30 pm
- Location: Virginia
- Contact:
I am an open dor.
I walk in and out of myself.
Some days I lock me but still the fill
of life seeps through underneath.
Please help!
This is a dor jam!
It hinges on your
openness.
Jam me, keep me ajar!
Slam me if you must...
(but that won't get you far.)
We are on the threshold of wonder!
(bet you wonder what i mean by that.)
Jam on, you'll see... cool jamcats.
heh
whatever all that means
I walk in and out of myself.
Some days I lock me but still the fill
of life seeps through underneath.
Please help!
This is a dor jam!
It hinges on your
openness.
Jam me, keep me ajar!
Slam me if you must...
(but that won't get you far.)
We are on the threshold of wonder!
(bet you wonder what i mean by that.)
Jam on, you'll see... cool jamcats.
heh
whatever all that means
- stilltrucking
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- Joined: October 24th, 2004, 12:29 pm
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the genie on the school bus
montgomery county maryland
the mark twain school for emotionaly disturbed children
doors
open doors to memory
close doors
sometimes I got to go back and check
make sure I had closed that door
this is a cry for help
i am typing and I can't stop
montgomery county maryland
the mark twain school for emotionaly disturbed children
doors
open doors to memory
close doors
sometimes I got to go back and check
make sure I had closed that door
this is a cry for help
i am typing and I can't stop

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