I am humbler than you

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mnaz
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I am humbler than you

Post by mnaz » May 8th, 2008, 4:29 pm

I am lower than the deepest rift
in heaven's bedrock mantle.
My voice seeps out and vanishes
on thermals out of Death Valley.

You are better than me.
My humility is better than yours.
In fact, my humility could kick
your humility's ass.

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Post by constantine » May 8th, 2008, 4:30 pm

no way!! my humility's ass is a masculine child.

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Post by mnaz » May 8th, 2008, 4:33 pm

Could so!

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Post by constantine » May 8th, 2008, 4:40 pm

let's let mikey decide.

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Post by Lightning Rod » May 8th, 2008, 5:01 pm

we should combine this amusing trilogy of threads
I would do it myself
but I'm too good for the job
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Post by Doreen Peri » May 8th, 2008, 5:01 pm

My ego has been so deflated,
my humility is underrated.
Fact is, I ain't worth a shit.

I'm a nothing, I am so degraded,
all my hopes and dreams deflated
because of it.

I'm just breathing other people's air,
taking up space I shoulda left there.
But what's a girl to do?

Don't even try it, don't try to compare.
I'd win hands down, it wouldn't be fair.
No question, I'm more humble than you!

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Post by constantine » May 8th, 2008, 5:18 pm

no way!

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Post by mtmynd » May 8th, 2008, 5:37 pm

my humility is blinded by this thread.

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Post by gypsyjoker » May 8th, 2008, 9:23 pm

my humility is huge
no one has ever walkd this earth
humble as I


I am so humble
I don't rumble
Hardly even tumble
anymore

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Post by constantine » May 8th, 2008, 9:30 pm

i'm so humble i fumble as i mumble. i stay crispy even in milk.

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Post by Arcadia » May 8th, 2008, 9:58 pm

I´m not tend to be jámbl!!!! :roll:
maybe I´m a relativist with limits, who knows!!!!!! :lol:

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Post by goldenmyst » May 16th, 2008, 11:10 pm

Mirror mirror on the wall, who's the humblest of them all? You guys crack me up. ;)

John

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