Gimme what I want

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hester_prynne
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Gimme what I want

Post by hester_prynne » November 6th, 2008, 11:41 pm

I WANT.
That's it,
fini,
the end.
No agenda hidden in here.
I just want,
plain as that.
You freakin
whats are all the same,
a you, a someone,
another goddamn want
always steamrollin over mine.
Dont' want that!
Nope.
I just want dammit.
Yeah, man,
i'm dreamin of my want
everyday.
No ifs, conditions, or whats.
An i'm gonna make this dream
come true.
Watch me!
Want! Oh Waaaant!
I'm calling you!
Where are you?
Yoo Hoo!
Pretty please come
to me dear want.
Dont' make me
have to feed
a whatness
to get you.
Nope.
No whats,
ifs, or youses wanted.
Only my want.
Begone you whats!
Out out damn ifs.
No bargaining twosome shit,
no rhetoric about
equal exchanges of energy.
Just I want, I want, I want.
In fact,
take the whatness crap
and shove it forever okay?
Just gimme what I WANT.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by judih » November 7th, 2008, 12:40 am

yeah, woman!
let it fucking out
Want is what it's all about
Declaring it is half the fun

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Post by Artguy » November 7th, 2008, 11:52 am

I know want
haunts my daze and night
makes me shake and quiver
with unknown fright..

Thanks for reminding me H.P.
want want want...

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Post by SmileGRL » November 7th, 2008, 3:09 pm

"i wanna talk about ME
wanna talk about I
wanna talk about
number one
oh my me my
what i think
what i like
what i know
what i WANT
what i see
i like talkin about you you you you usually
but occasionally
i wanna talk about ME"

- Toby Keith -

...jus a little country for you :wink:

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Post by saw » November 7th, 2008, 6:24 pm

funny and sharp, hester......favorite line; "Don't make me have to feed a whatness to get you".....excellent....I see you have decided to fly as the crow does, in a straight line....nothing wrong with that.......
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Post by constantine » November 7th, 2008, 9:09 pm

yoo hoo!

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Post by mtmynd » November 8th, 2008, 9:32 am

expressing the want... and doin' it well.

dig it! ;)

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Post by goldenmyst » November 9th, 2008, 8:55 pm

I want what I want when I want it, which is now; right now! Great poem. :)

John

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