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Posted: August 16th, 2008, 5:38 am
by judih
if 50 dollars were at hand
i'd bet that nazz'd beat the man
Posted: August 16th, 2008, 6:27 am
by Nazz
if that's the case,
it's a good thing 50 dollars isn't at hand,
'cause nobody beats the man..
Posted: August 16th, 2008, 9:04 am
by Doreen Peri
when my writing starts to sound like dr suess unintentionally
it's time to take a vacation from writing entirely
tomorrow i'm going to the sea
i will rhyme often though
keeps my mind fresh
poetry is music to me
most songs have rhymes
though i respect dr. suess enormously
(the man was a genius, it's true)
i edited my post so it didn't inadvertently
sound like him
because my lines were not children's poetry
and that wasn't my intention
Posted: August 16th, 2008, 9:25 am
by Doreen Peri
Theodor Seuss Geisel (aka dr. seuss) was not as well known for his political cartooning as he was for his children's cartooning and poetry. But he sold a lot of these, I'm pretty sure, to major publications.
http://www.marxists.org/subject/art/vis ... /index.htm
Pretty cool!
Saw a show on pbs about him some years back and i truly believe he was a genius.
>>>> and now back to your regularly scheduled programming <<<<
jam on
Posted: August 16th, 2008, 10:45 am
by judih
jam jar screwed
on tight
open sesame
tahini and tofu
wakeboard orange juice sky line
fine line
tween madness and genius
my genes are fading fast
if i die before i wake
let me fly the heavenly skies
Posted: August 16th, 2008, 12:34 pm
by Nazz
Dr. Seuss was just in my head
from some other posts that were said...
power of suggestion, and where it led,
wiki'd the man just to see what it read..
Fascinated by things so simple that impact.
yes.. just fifty words in Green Eggs y Ham,
and all monosyllabic, except 'a-ny-where'..
it is rated between ages four to eight,
& age forty-eight can still appreciate,
Well I can still re-late, at any rate...
if I were to be a rhymin' fool,
then it must be a glorious Saturday mornin'...
Posted: August 16th, 2008, 12:59 pm
by Doreen Peri
Yes, he was a treasure.
A creative power, no doubt!
If I could have known him
I would have known him,
I am a devout admirer.
Maybe if I did,
he would have said,
"Get that Doreen Peri,
and hire her!"

Posted: August 16th, 2008, 8:46 pm
by judih
doctor seuss meets ram dass
high on a mountain
with horton and who
no why, no need
mind totally freed
Posted: August 17th, 2008, 6:41 am
by stilltrucking
kindly and departed
sounds like home
my phone rings constantly
I don't have caller ID
I am listed
I hang up a lot
Ah me
this must be an jam
if it is about language
spontaneous
un pre meditated joy
of tippy tapping keys
like a reggae blues man.
no getting by dese blues man
blue sued shoes
jitterbugging at the YMHA
on a wood basketball court
in another time zone
some where up ahead
it every text box is spooky
with goofy possibilities
it must be jam
Posted: August 17th, 2008, 9:26 am
by judih
open for business
typing jam mind
gets it on
picks up vibratory letters
slams em down
first thought, first hit, first exposure
jam enclosure
boxed, toxed and deoxied
let her roll
Posted: August 18th, 2008, 4:36 pm
by stilltrucking
she got the moxy with the toxy de-oxy
darwin told of man's descent
who will speak of woman's ascent
If I am at a lost for words
if i can't stop
even so
this must be a jam
Going going Gone
Go
fingers find their words
and I sit and watch them flow.
I am toxified
mortified
petrified
and fossilzed
and happy to be alive
a mother and child
an unbroken chain
immortal
that flows through my veins
and links me to to my mothers before me
thanks mom
thanks dad
thanks for the fishies in the deep blue sea
with the boom boom boom
and the yabba dabba do
life's been good to me
so far
Posted: August 18th, 2008, 10:24 pm
by judih
cranking up my moxy
it ain't easy
nighttime bizarrities
lay me awake
adrenalin hits
if i could, i'd tell the alleycats
to quit their jam session
tin cans rolling
leaps from shed to tree
cries in the darkness
if i could, i'd tell those cats
to sow their wild oats
in some distant field
Posted: August 19th, 2008, 6:05 am
by stilltrucking
poor old tom cats
got a hard row to ho
so many veterans
I have slept behind
to keep the faith
and close my eyes
pounding slamming down
some mountain road in colorado
got to sleep
despite my fears.
cause he has to take a turn in the sleeper too
and counts on me to be wide eyed and bush tailed on my driving stint
old "happy" one of the best combat vets
I ever teamed with
he would tell me to sleep fast
and I would.
and the trains go bye in the night
a hundred yards away from the foot of my bed
the car alarms go off in the night
the ambulances scream by
I don't know how I manage to sleep
Adrenalin turns sour
happiness is a warm gun they say
I been thinking about getting one
I been locking my door at night lately
I have grown so complacent
rock a by baby
I wish I had a lullaby poem for you
something sweet
with a raga beat/
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Posted: August 19th, 2008, 8:00 am
by judih
hobo lullabye
to soothe the weary mind
if i had arlo's song, i'd be up at dawn
after a dreamy R.E.M.
salutations to your fine taste, stilltruckin
Posted: August 19th, 2008, 9:33 am
by the mingo
what a fine duet you two
stilltrucking & judih
finest thread to form here for a moon or two
I watched it come on - bloom - glow
I couldn't even get in it was so ~Go
ya'll like two coyotes calling out in the dark
driving the chained up dogs nuts