Grinning

[eugeneherman]

Grinning thru chrome echoed realities of the off duty corporates in their lazy indifference, If u feel it don't conceal it let ur rhythm do play for the best is a love song with nothing to say take ur time at the cup & you stand, walk away & keep watch for the shore where the wild dogs can play walk into everness with ur hat on, no shoes please culture lock, carpenter shock dual core intel processor & an incannel offset fishtail gouge

[Doreen Peri]

That's one of the most poetic creative complaints I've ever read! Are you sure you're complaining about something? heh

Hey eugene!!!!! Welcome welcome!

Want me to move this to the Creative Writing board where more people will see it and reply to it?

I know you're new here but this creative complaints board is really just for..... ummm.... how shall i say it..... oh yeah... bitching!



Lovely writing here...

thanks for stopping by! Hope you hang out a while and post more.

[Doreen Peri]

OK well I moved it to Creative Writing. Why? Because it's writing and because it's creative .... oh and also... because I wanted to and I can.