I am the me

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I am the me

Post by hester_prynne » September 30th, 2009, 12:48 am

From podium odeeyum
hear me speak,
while bits of cake
from my botox lips doth leak.

Words bejeweled ejeweled
come spouting out,
yes I am the me
everyone talks about.

No ground below elow
my heightened steps,
I float above
all human depths.

Unfathomable athomable
songs I sing,
I am unreachable
like a brass ring

Do not despair espair
at my being above,
pomp and eloquence
are a far cry from love.
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"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Post by Doreen Peri » September 30th, 2009, 11:48 am

Ha! I love it! ;)

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Post by revolutionrabbit » September 30th, 2009, 7:30 pm

striking, to ponder
told with a wild yonder
ponder yonder she goes

ode to a podium

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Post by sooZen » September 30th, 2009, 7:48 pm

Gotcha Hes'
Nice little ditty!
you are you
who is that girl?
Freedom's just another word...



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Post by Nazz » October 1st, 2009, 2:19 am

kinda reminded me of watching Sarah Palin do her Marie Antoinette-esque pontiferation on the teevee-- the fake righteous patriotism and puffery and what have ya, and the general disconnect of it all. Wasn't what I expected when I clicked on the title. Cool.

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Post by revolutionrabbit » October 1st, 2009, 3:18 am

the puffery of the power greedy.

and how did we arrive at this juncture?

that a whore of Babylon like Palin could seem even dumber then Bush.

as she practices shooting poor defenseless wolves from a Hell-copter, she
is being programed, just like they programed us, by dumbing us down,
with "lies lies and more goddamn lies"

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Post by SadLuckDame » October 1st, 2009, 7:54 am

Yes, lovely botox, lovely lies, Hester fun to be had in this. A dawning of a new race of plastic.

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Post by Arcadia » October 1st, 2009, 8:52 am

put all in one...! :lol: bravo, hester!!! :D

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Post by goldenmyst » October 1st, 2009, 1:25 pm

Superb use of language. The last line was a great ironic twist.

John

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Post by keithalanhamilton » October 17th, 2009, 9:53 am

from my botox lips doth leak.
Nice 8)

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Post by Barry » October 20th, 2009, 4:06 am

Do not despair espair
at my being above,
pomp and eloquence
are a far cry from love.
"You are the love from whence all my eloquence hath come."
(what he said to her on the night he died)

Peace,
Barry

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Post by saw » October 20th, 2009, 9:42 am

cool wordplay with substance, hester...enjoyed the musicality and message.......
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism

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