ROCKS IN THE RING OF FIRE

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ROCKS IN THE RING OF FIRE

Post by creativesoul » March 11th, 2012, 10:46 pm

the sun had not been seen in days- the river was around her- and opened and closed like a whirlpool- suddenly whirling on four sides-water- rain, tea leaves-tears-fear-water comes up the stairs-
people tell me stories about this road- that a woman had her baby ripped out of her arms by this river
that nancy got shot down the road, that this land got stolen by james bond- and the ham youngs want it back-the water rights were bought by james bond as well-
the water decides who you are-the light began to come thru the gray skies of kauai- rivers transformed this land after 50 inches of rain- the land just cannot hold anymore water- bridges are breaking- and trees-HUGE trees are dropping hard-
my friend whose back and neck were healed-was seen after the first floods- before the island was declared a natural disaster area- buying as much booze as he could get- yeah like hurricane parties the flood parties have made some islanders almost an endangered spieces.---being stuck in z house with a millionaire control freak and her husband for four days was truly an education is behavior i would not like to see again- being trapped with a control freak is really not very fun-when they get scared they tell you what is wrong with you-by now- it should be pretty ovious that i am not perfect- and that you could be in deep shit if you tell me what is wrong with me for three days in a row. being in the flood zone -even the doctors go nutz- worried about losing patients and their overhead- does that sound like a person that is into healing- nope- so thank God for the underground people in my life- that if this world was bike around only- well- that is something that is looking pretty close-!
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: ROCKS IN THE RING OF FIRE

Post by saw » March 20th, 2012, 6:47 am

great story, true or otherwise...but I assume this autobiographical.....man, you really paint a picture, trapped by a narcissist is something I can deeply relate to ..

it's relentless and exhausting.....and the only known cure is to get far away.....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: ROCKS IN THE RING OF FIRE

Post by creativesoul » March 20th, 2012, 11:33 am

right on-rock on- blessings
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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