Betwixt the Worlds

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Atehequa
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Betwixt the Worlds

Post by Atehequa » November 19th, 2012, 7:52 pm

Symbolic gestures, hints and warnings
Having little concerns for such displays
Perched high, well concealed by shadows
Beyond restful nights and scheduled days

Actions and reactions, ripples on the water
Pebbles and wishing coins tossed by fools
Unconcerned with a stream’s wild free flow
Having wishing wells and decorative pools

Betwixt the worlds, a grand place to wander
Never to be leased, yoked or prodded along
Able to soar aloft in sapphire hued dreams
Barred wing feathers and a short shrill song

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Re: Betwixt the Worlds

Post by dadio » November 21st, 2012, 7:39 am

Good poem. Enjoyed.

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Re: Betwixt the Worlds

Post by stilltrucking » November 21st, 2012, 11:58 am

ten four on what terry said
enjoyed the poem very much
liike the archaeology of the human soul
cro-magnon killers artists poets 8)


just on a personal note
thinking with a present bias
I wonder if there is any neandrathal dna in me, left over from the Paleolithic when I still worshiped the goddess.
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Re: Betwixt the Worlds

Post by Atehequa » November 21st, 2012, 4:02 pm

Thanks. I'm always ready for another ride in the 'way back machine'

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Re: Betwixt the Worlds

Post by sweetwater » November 22nd, 2012, 4:20 pm

out of the darkness and into the l______

starts with L and ends with t

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