conversations with old dead guys

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saw
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conversations with old dead guys

Post by saw » February 24th, 2016, 11:50 am

Shakespeare said take me
As You Like It, my intentions
forever ruminated in English classes,
in noisy pubs with clinking pint glasses
un-imagined new wrinkles splashed
with Guinness and projectile spit
words laid down like bread crumbs
my every notion there for public scrutiny

like an overactive teenage mind
the angst turned into witches
and I can't take any of it back
it's all out there in the howling tempest
blowing through the minutes
of the twelfth night, but here's a little tip,
the shrew cannot be tamed
she's a wild animal....hungry and feral
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

leafsailors ghost
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Re: conversations with old dead guys

Post by leafsailors ghost » February 24th, 2016, 1:10 pm

yes the energy of poetry when it is true has no bounds , I like this very much it has a cool punch

saw
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Re: conversations with old dead guys

Post by saw » February 26th, 2016, 12:06 pm

thanx, I kind of like this one...it streamed out so clearly without edits
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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the mingo
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Re: conversations with old dead guys

Post by the mingo » February 26th, 2016, 12:14 pm

* 8) *
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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