Whisperers

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Doreen Peri
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Whisperers

Post by Doreen Peri » April 12th, 2019, 7:02 pm

My pet peeve, she stated,
is overhearing whispering,
but only hearing the s’s.

But perhaps this is
what the whisperers
whispered,
I asserted:

“She's a sweetheart,
surely you should see that!
She shimmers sunshine,
showing sheer spontaneous superiority,
so smart, so sophisticated, so spry,
so special, so sassy, so scintillating!
Shhhhh... squelch the idea of a
shy sanctimonious stunner!
She is awesome!”

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Re: Whisperers

Post by saw » April 13th, 2019, 9:39 am

super savvy and sophisticated... 8)
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Re: Whisperers

Post by mtmynd » April 13th, 2019, 9:53 am

Hell YES!
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Post by the mingo » April 16th, 2019, 1:03 pm

Yeah, but ... <* 8) *>
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Post by mnaz » April 17th, 2019, 3:02 am

Yeah that ess sound ...

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Post by theirishsea » April 18th, 2019, 5:15 pm

Terrific poem. Love the whispering sibilants. And it is emotional sunshine.
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Re: Whisperers

Post by Doreen Peri » Yesterday, 1:57 am

So sorry I’m so scatterbrained, I somehow missed sending my thanks for your support and special responses. ❤️

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