It Wouldn't Have Lasted Anyways

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the mingo
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It Wouldn't Have Lasted Anyways

Post by the mingo » April 16th, 2019, 1:04 pm

the ghosts stayed late
to the passing
of the first spring thunderstorm

to the sound of raindrops
fading in the night
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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mnaz
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Re: It Wouldn't Have Lasted Anyways

Post by mnaz » April 17th, 2019, 3:06 am

ghosts and passing storms...

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Re: It Wouldn't Have Lasted Anyways

Post by theirishsea » April 18th, 2019, 5:13 pm

Simple and it lingers in the imagination. Nice one.
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

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