Telepathic

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Telepathic

Post by creativesoul » September 5th, 2019, 7:44 pm

She could feel it walking through her head
They thought it was a forest

The sounds and weight of her limbs
Distorted in mind: colors getting brighter

Pain inside the warp
The threads ran the wrong way

Shuffling feet and the scent of flowers
Little girls running and laughing for hours


Ballerinas with screams of joy
Smiles accross the ocean
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Telepathic

Post by Cenacle » September 5th, 2019, 9:28 pm

wow, you are good!

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Re: Telepathic

Post by judih » September 5th, 2019, 10:26 pm

agree with ray, jana
this is fabulous

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Re: Telepathic

Post by creativesoul » September 6th, 2019, 10:32 am

Wow- I am deeply madly touched( you knew that!) such
Beautiful compliments
Thank u
Mahalo
Mtake oyasin
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: Telepathic

Post by saw » September 7th, 2019, 8:01 am

mysterious
like the first page of an intriguing novel
we learn there is more to this introduction

well done....nice use of language to set the stage
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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