sea-talk time

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Perdida
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sea-talk time

Post by Perdida » April 3rd, 2009, 4:58 am

sea-talk time

looking in side-ways
and up-side-down
you, my ocean
sea-talk me

the far-away island
you reach to touch
from time to time
with words that you wear
on the tip of a wave

un-ironed

when you fall
crashing
to gather the end of me

and i feel all amorosi
and the scream
on my skin
a perfect submersion

of lightning and gulls
of feet running
and shells that touch
the edge of daylight

out-of-the-way



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constantine
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Post by constantine » April 5th, 2009, 5:04 pm

this reminds me of the wall paintings at the temple of knossos in crete. the playful sea imagery. beautiful.

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Post by Yejun » April 5th, 2009, 5:52 pm

I liked this one as well.

When I can find the time, I wanna say a few things about this one--at your place. :D

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Post by mudshark » April 6th, 2009, 2:00 pm

hell, even I liked this one.
and I usually don't.

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Post by Axanderdeath » April 6th, 2009, 10:06 pm

whats with the copyright?

common metophores are stolen with out knowing
now known, i am sorry
reminds me of love
and beauty
or maybe that is what it is.......

in bitterness love evokes hate
and hell i have stolen ever line
word
i stole my thoughts from my parents
my life

watch the movie basquait
it will make you cry
maybe you could make
your own emotion from a body
a vast body
a superhighway
one cell

copurighted dogs barking whimper

GAP
thus spoke G.A.P.

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Post by Perdida » April 9th, 2009, 6:27 pm

Thank you Constantine, aslways nice to hear from you :D

Yejun, yur welcome at my place anytime. I thank you.

Mudshark, hell, then that's a bonus! *grins*

Mr Death, Is that so? Wow! :shock:
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