please be gentle
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Last edited by Lao C Ryter on February 23rd, 2011, 5:19 pm, edited 1 time in total.
if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.
-FIN
night would be lost for my shiver.
-FIN
Re: please be gentle
Ektroma—taken from a wound—
aborted from the womb
by purpose or by miscarriage
of justice or of health:
if this is how I came to be
once born – not born again –
then still I hope I had a name
and someone knew my face.
aborted from the womb
by purpose or by miscarriage
of justice or of health:
if this is how I came to be
once born – not born again –
then still I hope I had a name
and someone knew my face.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw
Re: please be gentle
[and welcome. I'm sorry--I did a lousy job of remembering to welcome you, Lao C]
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw
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Re: please be gentle
my rage brandishes my name
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Re: please be gentle
Extraordinary, Lao, as is Joel's response. Rare poetry here. Stick around and inspire us. jim
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You've tapped into solid gold - welcome aboard Lao!
The road to happiness: Perseverance, Endurance and a whole lot of Hope.
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If your Rage is yours,
then let me own
what is rightful-
My Happiness.
I will not absorb your Rage;
you've purchased it,
earned it,
fought for it.
It's yours for you to revel in
and enjoy.
Here lies the gift-wrapped Happiness,
and I pull at the strings of the bow gently.
Here I extend to you what I've unraveled;
do what you will with it,
but don't take away my Happiness.
then let me own
what is rightful-
My Happiness.
I will not absorb your Rage;
you've purchased it,
earned it,
fought for it.
It's yours for you to revel in
and enjoy.
Here lies the gift-wrapped Happiness,
and I pull at the strings of the bow gently.
Here I extend to you what I've unraveled;
do what you will with it,
but don't take away my Happiness.
The road to happiness: Perseverance, Endurance and a whole lot of Hope.
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my rage seems
the firmament
that your happiness sinks
it's toe's into.
sinks it's toe's into
and wiggles them.
wiggling rightful happy toe's.
the firmament
that your happiness sinks
it's toe's into.
sinks it's toe's into
and wiggles them.
wiggling rightful happy toe's.
if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.
-FIN
night would be lost for my shiver.
-FIN
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Thanks for the welcome Lucy.
Your reply is excellent!
Your reply is excellent!
if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.
-FIN
night would be lost for my shiver.
-FIN
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Re: please be gentle
Room for wiggling one's toes,
wiggling away the Anger
and creating suds of Neutrality
to balance it all out.
wiggling away the Anger
and creating suds of Neutrality
to balance it all out.
The road to happiness: Perseverance, Endurance and a whole lot of Hope.
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