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please be gentle

Post by Lao C Ryter » December 1st, 2010, 3:02 pm

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if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.

-FIN

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Re: please be gentle

Post by joel » December 1st, 2010, 3:39 pm

Ektroma—taken from a wound—
aborted from the womb
by purpose or by miscarriage
of justice or of health:

if this is how I came to be
once born – not born again –
then still I hope I had a name
and someone knew my face.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by joel » December 1st, 2010, 3:40 pm

[and welcome. I'm sorry--I did a lousy job of remembering to welcome you, Lao C]
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Post by judih » December 1st, 2010, 11:03 pm

my rage brandishes my name
i love this image

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Post by jim turner » December 1st, 2010, 11:07 pm

Extraordinary, Lao, as is Joel's response. Rare poetry here. Stick around and inspire us. jim

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Post by .Lucy. » December 1st, 2010, 11:23 pm

You've tapped into solid gold - welcome aboard Lao!
The road to happiness: Perseverance, Endurance and a whole lot of Hope.

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Post by .Lucy. » December 1st, 2010, 11:34 pm

If your Rage is yours,
then let me own
what is rightful-
My Happiness.

I will not absorb your Rage;
you've purchased it,
earned it,
fought for it.
It's yours for you to revel in
and enjoy.

Here lies the gift-wrapped Happiness,
and I pull at the strings of the bow gently.

Here I extend to you what I've unraveled;
do what you will with it,
but don't take away my Happiness.
The road to happiness: Perseverance, Endurance and a whole lot of Hope.

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Post by Lao C Ryter » December 1st, 2010, 11:51 pm

my rage seems
the firmament
that your happiness sinks
it's toe's into.
sinks it's toe's into
and wiggles them.
wiggling rightful happy toe's.
if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.

-FIN

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Re: please be gentle

Post by Lao C Ryter » December 1st, 2010, 11:54 pm

Thanks for the welcome Lucy.
Your reply is excellent!
if words could mend the holes in my quilt
night would be lost for my shiver.

-FIN

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Re: please be gentle

Post by .Lucy. » December 2nd, 2010, 12:29 am

Room for wiggling one's toes,
wiggling away the Anger
and creating suds of Neutrality
to balance it all out.
The road to happiness: Perseverance, Endurance and a whole lot of Hope.

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