CLIMBING WITH JANE.

Post your poetry, any style.
Post Reply
User avatar
dadio
Posts: 4652
Joined: December 10th, 2010, 1:20 pm

CLIMBING WITH JANE.

Post by dadio » February 23rd, 2012, 5:14 am

Jane had climbed
the Downs with you

and had hardly spoken
on the tiring climb

along the dried up tracks
on the way up

and then at the top
standing beside you

she stared out across
the countryside

and said
you can see

where I live from here
and she pointed out

to the church down beneath
and you said

yes
and took in the church

and the house
where she lived

with the parson
and his wife

and tried to pick out
which bedroom was hers

and she said
I like it up here

away from the crowds
and nearer to God

and you studied her profile
and her hair

and the way she stood there
in that summer dress

and sandals
and with that youthfulness

and you wanted suddenly
to kiss her

and embrace her
but you didn’t

you just stood
and studied her profile

and moving closer
you reached out

your hand
and touched hers

and her hand was warm
and as you squeezed it gently

you sensed the pulse of life
run through

and the moment
seemed to explode

in your head
in a myriad

of colours and sounds
and you rubbed your thumb

along her wrist
checking the pulse

the life
wanting her

to be the one
and pointing upward

she said breaking through
your dream

look at the colour
of that sky

and feel the warmth
of sun.
Attachments
dadio1961.jpg
dadio1961.jpg (11.1 KiB) Viewed 77 times

saw
Posts: 8697
Joined: May 23rd, 2008, 7:32 am
Location: B'more, Maryland

Re: CLIMBING WITH JANE.

Post by saw » February 23rd, 2012, 7:03 am

the recollections of coming of age.....simple and true......I wonder where she is now....or maybe you already know........enjoyed the way you framed the moment
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

User avatar
dadio
Posts: 4652
Joined: December 10th, 2010, 1:20 pm

Re: CLIMBING WITH JANE.

Post by dadio » February 23rd, 2012, 11:32 am

Thank you, Saw. No idea where is or how she is not seen her since late 1961. Memories however are fruitful for writing.

Post Reply

Return to “Poetry”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 1 guest