Jane had climbed
the Downs with you
and had hardly spoken
on the tiring climb
along the dried up tracks
on the way up
and then at the top
standing beside you
she stared out across
the countryside
and said
you can see
where I live from here
and she pointed out
to the church down beneath
and you said
yes
and took in the church
and the house
where she lived
with the parson
and his wife
and tried to pick out
which bedroom was hers
and she said
I like it up here
away from the crowds
and nearer to God
and you studied her profile
and her hair
and the way she stood there
in that summer dress
and sandals
and with that youthfulness
and you wanted suddenly
to kiss her
and embrace her
but you didn’t
you just stood
and studied her profile
and moving closer
you reached out
your hand
and touched hers
and her hand was warm
and as you squeezed it gently
you sensed the pulse of life
run through
and the moment
seemed to explode
in your head
in a myriad
of colours and sounds
and you rubbed your thumb
along her wrist
checking the pulse
the life
wanting her
to be the one
and pointing upward
she said breaking through
your dream
look at the colour
of that sky
and feel the warmth
of sun.
CLIMBING WITH JANE.
CLIMBING WITH JANE.
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Re: CLIMBING WITH JANE.
the recollections of coming of age.....simple and true......I wonder where she is now....or maybe you already know........enjoyed the way you framed the moment
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
Re: CLIMBING WITH JANE.
Thank you, Saw. No idea where is or how she is not seen her since late 1961. Memories however are fruitful for writing.
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