Man walks by.
From a distance
I see him out my window.
Dark maleness
hunched against some wind,
slightly bent forward,
head down,
grocery bag in hand.
He disappears from view.
His impression,
sticks on the glass.
Looks at me.
Starts a shiver spree.
Yanks at tenderly.
But I'm not ready for that, no,
never was ready for that.....
Yanks at tenderly
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Yanks at tenderly
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW
Re: Yanks at tenderly
Hester, you're wording is vivid and as your man walks by, I see him going down a untold number of roads. What an intriguing possibility. I'm really taken...and I think I might watch him wander (maybe not where you saw him going, but thank you).
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw
Re: Yanks at tenderly
ayuh.
these two are quite a pair of poems.
bravo.
these two are quite a pair of poems.
bravo.
godless & songless, western man dances with the stuffed gorilla through all the blind alleys of a dead-end world.
-maxwell bodenheim
-maxwell bodenheim
Re: Yanks at tenderly
I suspect that more often than we would like to admit the fantasy is better than the reality......connectivity comes in many forms that all tend to have a bittersweet taste........a really good poem....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
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Re: Yanks at tenderly
Good poem Hester
left me wondering
if I was ever ready
left me wondering
if I was ever ready
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