Yanks at tenderly

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hester_prynne
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Yanks at tenderly

Post by hester_prynne » September 15th, 2010, 1:37 am

Man walks by.
From a distance
I see him out my window.
Dark maleness
hunched against some wind,
slightly bent forward,
head down,
grocery bag in hand.

He disappears from view.
His impression,
sticks on the glass.
Looks at me.
Starts a shiver spree.
Yanks at tenderly.
But I'm not ready for that, no,
never was ready for that.....
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW

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Re: Yanks at tenderly

Post by joel » September 15th, 2010, 12:22 pm

Hester, you're wording is vivid and as your man walks by, I see him going down a untold number of roads. What an intriguing possibility. I'm really taken...and I think I might watch him wander (maybe not where you saw him going, but thank you).
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Re: Yanks at tenderly

Post by mindbum » September 16th, 2010, 5:09 pm

ayuh.

these two are quite a pair of poems.

bravo.
godless & songless, western man dances with the stuffed gorilla through all the blind alleys of a dead-end world.

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Re: Yanks at tenderly

Post by saw » September 19th, 2010, 8:15 am

I suspect that more often than we would like to admit the fantasy is better than the reality......connectivity comes in many forms that all tend to have a bittersweet taste........a really good poem....
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Re: Yanks at tenderly

Post by still.trucking » September 19th, 2010, 8:27 am

Good poem Hester
left me wondering
if I was ever ready
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