Five Crows

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jim turner
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Five Crows

Post by jim turner » November 22nd, 2010, 12:51 pm

Five crows at evening
fight the western wind.
Defeated, they veer,
slide south,
complaining angrily,
This is not where we wanted to go.

Jim 5/31/09
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Re: Five Crows

Post by Doreen Peri » November 22nd, 2010, 3:54 pm

This is not where we wanted to go.
That's what they sound like, huh? buncha complainers... squawk! They scare me!

I love this poem. Brief, descriptive, a photo of a moment in time. Thanks for sharing it, Jim!
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Re: Five Crows

Post by happytrails » November 22nd, 2010, 5:07 pm

You always seem to manage to paint a vivid picture in very few words. Love it. And your ability to do it. :) :wink:
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Re: Five Crows

Post by hester_prynne » November 26th, 2010, 1:26 pm

Brilliant...

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