Compromise
Compromise
I will not compromise
Not give up my self for you
I will not give you
what I am not willing to offer
You are unwilling to offer a single atom
Expect to see me slice my self to please you
This I cannot understand
Compromise?
Farewell
LT 2-14-05
Not give up my self for you
I will not give you
what I am not willing to offer
You are unwilling to offer a single atom
Expect to see me slice my self to please you
This I cannot understand
Compromise?
Farewell
LT 2-14-05
- Axanderdeath
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ahh
if you only knew that it was quite the contrary
and its not just about sex
there's more to life than the physical realm superifical beings drown in
Lucy-
and its not just about sex
there's more to life than the physical realm superifical beings drown in
Lucy-
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Geoff - that's "you're" not "your" as in "you are", hyphenated by losing the a in "are" Stop and go to sleep. gnight!
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Lucy!!! great to see you... got your mail but can't remember if I replied.
busy here.... great compromise poem... really fine... don't ever do it! The only gamble is Love worth giving 100% 'cause otherwise you can't win, y'know? Compromise? noway girlfriend. Love you! will you be my valentine?
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Lucy!!! great to see you... got your mail but can't remember if I replied.

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Since you really are a poet I suppose I have to cut you some slack, poetic license ya knowYou are unwilling to offer a single atom and its not just about sex
there's more to life than the physical realm superficial beings drown in
Geoff you need to get some sleep, if you aren't a happy drunk I pity you,
Lucy that thing about a single atom, if I could take a little license too, and jam it, I would say not true, we are flaking off atoms all the time in fact there is no clear boundary between two people in a way, like looking at a picture in Photoshop you keep blowing it up and what was black and white is now shades of gray moving outward ever lighter and lighter. What DP was talking about in finding the boundaries between what was her and what was the rest of the universe. Sex a pretty good way to rub off a lot of atoms. But love is way more than just sex.
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