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Compromise

Post by Lucy! » February 15th, 2005, 1:42 am

I will not compromise
Not give up my self for you
I will not give you
what I am not willing to offer

You are unwilling to offer a single atom
Expect to see me slice my self to please you
This I cannot understand

Compromise?

Farewell


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Post by Axanderdeath » February 15th, 2005, 1:46 am

lucy give it upevery one else is doing it
so stop being a prude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1






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ahh

Post by Lucy! » February 15th, 2005, 1:49 am

if you only knew that it was quite the contrary

and its not just about sex

there's more to life than the physical realm superifical beings drown in

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Post by Axanderdeath » February 15th, 2005, 1:58 am

bullshit lucy. Maybe I will see what you are saying to-morow but I am drunk as fuck now, so your dumb, and stupid!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Lucy! » February 15th, 2005, 2:01 am

its all bullshit when you stupify yourself with mind altering chemicals

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Post by Doreen Peri » February 15th, 2005, 2:05 am

Geoff - that's "you're" not "your" as in "you are", hyphenated by losing the a in "are" Stop and go to sleep. gnight!
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Lucy!!! great to see you... got your mail but can't remember if I replied. ;) busy here.... great compromise poem... really fine... don't ever do it! The only gamble is Love worth giving 100% 'cause otherwise you can't win, y'know? Compromise? noway girlfriend. Love you! will you be my valentine?

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Post by stilltrucking » February 15th, 2005, 2:46 pm

You are unwilling to offer a single atom and its not just about sex

there's more to life than the physical realm superficial beings drown in
Since you really are a poet I suppose I have to cut you some slack, poetic license ya know
Geoff you need to get some sleep, if you aren't a happy drunk I pity you,
Lucy that thing about a single atom, if I could take a little license too, and jam it, I would say not true, we are flaking off atoms all the time in fact there is no clear boundary between two people in a way, like looking at a picture in Photoshop you keep blowing it up and what was black and white is now shades of gray moving outward ever lighter and lighter. What DP was talking about in finding the boundaries between what was her and what was the rest of the universe. Sex a pretty good way to rub off a lot of atoms. But love is way more than just sex.

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Post by Doreen Peri » February 15th, 2005, 2:54 pm

Geoff - I was going to take the time to split the threads and dump some of your comments from last night in the Dumpster but I really don't have the time to hunt them all down. Please refrain from insulting people and saying mean things to people on here, OK?

Thanks.

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