snow in the fields

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the mingo
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snow in the fields

Post by the mingo » December 20th, 2013, 11:06 am

snow in the fields
snow in the woods
i don't see you
i don't see your tracks
or the tracks of your dog
the beach in the snow
is like me
without you now
i remember when you
brought me
the bird bones you found
held them out to me
opened your hand so i could see
your fingers uncurling
you said
look
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: snow in the fields

Post by saw » December 21st, 2013, 10:59 am

beautiful snapshot....the emotion is undeniable ....well done
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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Re: snow in the fields

Post by dadio » December 22nd, 2013, 3:50 am

Photogenic in its blow up big and something so small yet beautiful
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Re: snow in the fields

Post by the mingo » December 22nd, 2013, 7:42 am

thx saw & terry 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: snow in the fields

Post by creativesoul » December 22nd, 2013, 7:50 am

I love this-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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