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Far Off

Post by the mingo » February 17th, 2015, 6:34 pm

boats in harbor, coast in mist
far off, one hopes very far, the place
where everything disappears
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: Far Off

Post by saw » February 17th, 2015, 6:50 pm

I really like this new venture in brevity mingo....the poem is open to so much....
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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Re: Far Off

Post by the mingo » February 17th, 2015, 10:16 pm

Thx, saw, I'm discovering making less do more has more than one level to it in regards one's own perception of things. Thx again
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: Far Off

Post by WIREMAN » February 17th, 2015, 10:34 pm

all hail mongolia!
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Re: Far Off

Post by judih » February 17th, 2015, 11:46 pm

that distant place
we'll never reach
but, so what!
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Re: Far Off

Post by the mingo » February 18th, 2015, 9:59 am

Thanks wireman & judih ! 8) 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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