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the mingo: Posts: 9713; Joined: June 26th, 2005, 3:51 am; Location: Tug Hill Plateau

Post by the mingo » February 17th, 2015, 6:34 pm

boats in harbor, coast in mist
far off, one hopes very far, the place
where everything disappears

Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by saw » February 17th, 2015, 6:50 pm

I really like this new venture in brevity mingo....the poem is open to so much....

If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

the mingo: Posts: 9713; Joined: June 26th, 2005, 3:51 am; Location: Tug Hill Plateau

Post by the mingo » February 17th, 2015, 10:16 pm

Thx, saw, I'm discovering making less do more has more than one level to it in regards one's own perception of things. Thx again

Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Post by WIREMAN » February 17th, 2015, 10:34 pm

all hail mongolia!

me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Post by judih » February 17th, 2015, 11:46 pm

that distant place
we'll never reach
but, so what!

the mingo: Posts: 9713; Joined: June 26th, 2005, 3:51 am; Location: Tug Hill Plateau

Post by the mingo » February 18th, 2015, 9:59 am

Thanks wireman & judih !

Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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