"...and Quiet"

[68degrees]

My own quietness mimics
the dead

who had nothing more
to say, had no more living to do
and decided to lie down

with the rest of their loves
for eternity

[the mingo]

Righteous

[leafsailors ghost]

Made me think. the dead I know are not so quiet ,but I get the feeling of you poemand what you are saying about how you feel at this time, I get that way from time to time when I have been hasseld all I can take.

[saw]

outstanding....so much power and art in such brevity....

[Grinch]

Nice poem

A little bit of P&Q is good for you

[68degrees]

Righteous

Thanks.

[68degrees]

Made me think. the dead I know are not so quiet ,but I get the feeling of you poemand what you are saying about how you feel at this time, I get that way from time to time when I have been hasseld all I can take.

True. Sometimes it seems like the dead shout to me.

68degrees

[68degrees]

outstanding....so much power and art in such brevity....

Thank you. Been working on "fewer words" on some of my older poems. This is one of those.

68degrees

[68degrees]

Nice poem

A little bit of P&Q is good for you

Thanks.

A poem like this would be denigrated at AT. The main puckheads are not poets. They are shouters.

68degrees