I don't want to write a poem
I want to write something as real as the screams
any baby bird makes again & again & again
being torn apart by a crow
something you can hear
in your mother humping bones
something you will jam your fingers
in your ears over & will run run away from
but won't forget
I don't want to write a poem
I don't want to write a poem
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
Re: I don't want to write a poem
difficult to achieve....but we try and try.... 
sometimes we get pretty close
sometimes we get pretty closethe death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
Re: I don't want to write a poem
I promise not to forget
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
Re: I don't want to write a poem
saw & Wireman - Thx for reading, appreciate it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: I don't want to write a poem
one sound effect
worth one thousand words
worth one thousand words
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Re: I don't want to write a poem
cool-reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: I don't want to write a poem
Thx, judih & Jana - appreciate it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
Re: I don't want to write a poem
And yet you did..
Re: I don't want to write a poem
I did.mnaz wrote:And yet you did..
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
Re: I don't want to write a poem
Even though you didn't want to.
Re: I don't want to write a poem
That's not what I said. You suck as a reader for sure. I said I wanted to write something "as real as" -mnaz wrote:Even though you didn't want to.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
Re: I don't want to write a poem
No, you suck as a writer.
You said: "I don't want to write a poem."
And then you wrote one.
I merely pointed this simple misstep out, that's all.
You said: "I don't want to write a poem."
And then you wrote one.
I merely pointed this simple misstep out, that's all.
Re: I don't want to write a poem
I thank you for all your gracious efforts on my behalf. I'm always trying to reduce the number of my faults but I have yet to come to the end of them.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
Re: I don't want to write a poem
We never do.
You're welcome.
You're welcome.
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