I don't want to write a poem
I want to write something as real as the screams
any baby bird makes again & again & again
being torn apart by a crow
something you can hear
in your mother humping bones
something you will jam your fingers
in your ears over & will run run away from
but won't forget
I don't want to write a poem
I don't want to write a poem
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
Re: I don't want to write a poem
difficult to achieve....but we try and try.... 
sometimes we get pretty close
sometimes we get pretty closeIf you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
you may end up where you are heading
Re: I don't want to write a poem
I promise not to forget
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
Re: I don't want to write a poem
saw & Wireman - Thx for reading, appreciate it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: I don't want to write a poem
one sound effect
worth one thousand words
worth one thousand words
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Re: I don't want to write a poem
cool-reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: I don't want to write a poem
Thx, judih & Jana - appreciate it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
Re: I don't want to write a poem
And yet you did..
Re: I don't want to write a poem
I did.mnaz wrote:And yet you did..
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
Re: I don't want to write a poem
Even though you didn't want to.
Re: I don't want to write a poem
That's not what I said. You suck as a reader for sure. I said I wanted to write something "as real as" -mnaz wrote:Even though you didn't want to.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
Re: I don't want to write a poem
No, you suck as a writer.
You said: "I don't want to write a poem."
And then you wrote one.
I merely pointed this simple misstep out, that's all.
You said: "I don't want to write a poem."
And then you wrote one.
I merely pointed this simple misstep out, that's all.
Re: I don't want to write a poem
I thank you for all your gracious efforts on my behalf. I'm always trying to reduce the number of my faults but I have yet to come to the end of them.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
Re: I don't want to write a poem
We never do.
You're welcome.
You're welcome.
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