christmas tree (a visual poem)

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mtmynd
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christmas tree (a visual poem)

Post by mtmynd » December 13th, 2008, 2:56 pm

<center>*+*
*~O~*
*+*
~+ o! yes! +~
~ it's all finished! ~

U U U U U U U U U U U U
~ our old artificial tree ~
~ was decorated this morning ~
~ the once a year spectacle for all ~
~ a christmas tree full dressed for giving
~
o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o
~ cleverly adorned in strings of colored lights ~
(*) (*) (*) (*) (*) (*) (*) (*) (*) (*) (*) (*) (*) (*) (*) (*) (*)
~ three strings of colored beads circling around ~
~ and between all that twelve hanging ornaments ~
~ of two different shapes and of two different colors ~
(-) (-) (-) (-) (-) (-) (-) (-) (-) (-) (-) (-) (-) (-) (-) (-)
~ and at the base a clean white sheet surrounds the tree ~
~ as if a fresh snowfall had silently fallen without any warning ~
~ the night before while sleeping soundly warmly wrapped in dreams
~
___
___
christmas
for all
who
wish
^^^^^^^^^^^
</center>


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Post by Doreen Peri » December 13th, 2008, 3:03 pm

that's beautiful!

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Post by mtmynd » December 13th, 2008, 3:05 pm

i smile when you talk like that.

:)

thank you, Doreen Peri!

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Post by stilltrucking » December 13th, 2008, 4:34 pm

I don't have much Christmas cheer yet
but that helped
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Post by Arcadia » December 14th, 2008, 12:28 pm

I´ll printed it and hang it somewhere in the dept, Cecil!! (even maybe I´ll try a translation! :lol: ) muchas gracias!!!!!! :D

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Post by SmileGRL » December 17th, 2008, 3:29 pm

very clever...& pRetty 2! merry very christmas mr. C and family :P

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