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Post by HaroHalola » December 15th, 2008, 3:42 pm

Note: "How can there have been such strife in a Morlde` filled with beautiful Music; &
how could there have been beautiful Music such in a Morlde` filled with strife?" -Soupy Sales, 2012.

The 12 Panes Of Christmas:
_______________________________________________________________________________

Yule be Xmas
afore ye know
the pag'an go
for patterned
stamped snowflakes
'bove the
Andy Williams' Shows
DVD Stufftaculate CD,
Away, In A Manger For The Happy Employees,
drivelings (no place like) home
for the Hollydayease
in
a Ford Barricade & SUG Thirsty,
Nay, the new GM Bailout.

Suffer
the little Children
new bornes, infants
what nary see
but a Semi-Claus
ere
semiclaws,
tithes for the celibre-cause`craws.

Remembrances
to things past-past, of
natal assemblies
en callow chorale masse
gone
Proustikipped,
to mortitorium's
N'well

& stockings filled
with
the chimney's cold care
yet in hopes
das Geheimnis Viktoria
would
somehow brassiere...
rout despair
the Tree hovers
Cabbage Patch? Nay!,
but the oft'splayed
Perry Como - You Win!,
Get to poke the Golgotha pins -
WakeUp, boorros!
Bing-Bing!
WakeUp!, Jokers
to the St. Jack Nihilist...
but ya wanna
bat 'n ball this 'round?
You a'ready donned Santa,
with a semi-


Dear G*d,
(Walsch also asked)
How're You doin' It, &
Your Son?...Tarnished
proof weighdown here, filled
with
vanilla, frozen grins &
Joyburdened smiles...
'neath
pattern-stamped snowflakes &
piney Glade heads
afore the marshed desert
Koyaanisqatsi

Like yearlings'
trotted-out
Saviormusic
whilst the other 333
like
666 -
doubled for toil 'n trouble -
employed
to savaging
One, many, or 'nother...

Christmas partidges'
riffeled feathers family?
pared, unprepaired,
Indeed, vouchsafed
an enemy sans name
on
a horse with no name, save
Internecine

AmeriKa.

For
A kiss 'neath
the mistlesilo
whilst acaroling
of the Bedlamites
(Acts, II: 2-6),
the Psalming 100?,
Screeching
like sleds in pit gravel to
the Silent Night

HeyMen!

There lies
an evergrander Light
at the Dawn, but
Hey!,
who's gonna
tear-away
from
Yawnni,
& the extra-Vaganza
of
Truth?

H.e.m.
12.13.MMviii.
(ST)
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Post by Lightning Rod » December 15th, 2008, 5:20 pm

Happy Humbug to you too, HH

your tree is decorated with some nifty little puns

--Eb'neezer
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Post by stilltrucking » December 15th, 2008, 5:35 pm

In the meantime, today another 30,000 children will die of the consequences of poverty. And as dusk falls in Africa and Asia, aching parents will struggle to decide which of their children to put under the mosquito net and which to expose to malaria.
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Post by mtmynd » December 15th, 2008, 7:04 pm

yup!
he declared to his self
this was... indeed,
it really was.


cheers!

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Post by stilltrucking » December 15th, 2008, 7:45 pm

thinking about mosquito nets under christmas trees.

a stimulating poem
thanks
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Post by Arcadia » December 16th, 2008, 9:30 pm

it sounds very Brecht! :lol: gracias!!!!! :D

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Post by HaroHalola » December 16th, 2008, 10:29 pm

stilltruckin' - Would that It were I was not compelled to Write this Piece anymore than you're transporting the NYT blurb, alas... I cannot but help think about such things, compulsively. TY for the approbation, YW, too. I hope ReReading to the Reduxed, embellishmeant-Version provided a greater impact - Many Blessings - H'H./H.e.m.
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Post by HaroHalola » December 16th, 2008, 10:38 pm

mymynd - TY, always the laconic; Indeed! - H'H./H.e.m.
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Post by HaroHalola » December 16th, 2008, 10:45 pm

Arcadia - Yes, & if only we were 'neath the rule of Mother's Courage! A la orden, por nada - H'H./H.e.m.
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Post by K&D » December 17th, 2008, 1:26 am

i'm awaiting the semi-claus to bring together loyalty and yearning but there are too many buts. :?

maybe it all went a rhye when William S. was in one of the burrows under the tree when i was 16.

who knows!

i liked it.
Blah!

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