Song ForevAmore

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Lightning Rod
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Song ForevAmore

Post by Lightning Rod » December 28th, 2008, 2:19 pm

Song ForevAmore


You know that it's all over
when she doesn't even bother
to fake it anymore

and you can give and give and give
and give until you can't
take it anymore

for all of our excuses
we are just as we are
all that we are doing
is following our star

all the melted answers
they undress like late night dancers
they are following their stars

and even the stars
follow their stars
and all the stars are chasing
chasing la amore
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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Post by Doreen Peri » December 28th, 2008, 2:27 pm

did you put music to it?

i'm sure we all can identify with this one

stanza #2 rings so true to me

i like it when you rhyme

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Post by Lightning Rod » December 28th, 2008, 2:31 pm

I was writing both music and lyric at once
one influenced the other
not finished yet
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye

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